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As the cherry falls from the tree to the water,
let's be the ripples across its surface.
when all seems still ,
let's be the ones to break the reflecting calm.

let's make waves that bounce off the light,
and dance among the fish,
floating slowly with the time,
let's be the splash of color that illuminates the dawn.

should the cold come,
let us be the fire.
playfully lapping at the sky,
arms outstretched,
reaching for the stars.

should the world fall still,
we shall be the breeze.
tugging and playing at the trees,
begging them to move and dance like they used to.

and when fatality chases us,
let us be the new life.
a seed though we be,
soon we shall grow.

let us grow old together,
let's reach a point in the silence where the open fields take our breath away
let us never be out of sight,
lest the beating of our hearts fall uneven

as the cherry falls to the waters surface,
i slowly drift into your eyes,
and all i see is you...
©2008-2009 ~junkauge
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I really hope i can say this to a girl someday ^^
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I like it...if you say this to a girl i believe they would have to have an ugly heart to not like it or appreciate it

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I love everything i kill
I kill everything I love
aww...if I was a girl.....with a heart...I'd melt XD
that sir, was lovely poetry XD

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First I whip it out!
Then I thrust it!
With great force!
Every angle....It penetrates!
Until....with great strength!
I....RAM IT IN!
In the end, we\'re all satisfied...
And you are set free...
-Dante (DMC 4)
Geez, that's too beautiful, Jos...

..and you always can give it to her written...=) but what's hard on telling her?

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Take Your time, think a lot,
think of everything You've got
For You will still be here tomorrow,
but Your dreams may not...
:lmao:...big brother's in love:poke:

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"the Lord is my light and my salvation, whom shall I fear? the Lord is the strength of my life, whom shall i be afraid?" -Psalms 27:1
Hurrah, you submitted it! :D

You see, I told you it was beautiful. I agree with Jaro - you could always hand it to her written. :)

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Desiderius Erasmus
:nod:

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
haha thankyou ^^

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
lol not really
but love poems are fun to write ^^

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7
lol nothing hard
its just finding one you know? i dont exactly have a special girl yet haha
oh well ^^;

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光 | "All Those people that look like they're thinking... But their not. How Discusting" Anemone - Eureka 7

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